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Steve Motuel
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since 2003-12-19
Posts 72
Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany

0 posted 2003-12-19 04:52 PM


The idea behind my first poem was to open the hearts and minds of the readers, the poem was intended to inspire and provoke... which it did! here is my reply which took many years to come through..

Within the mists of time he came
a being whom we gave no name
his eyes ablaze with buning fire
the sweet warm flames of loves desire

his every move precise and true
and with his mouth a kiss he blew
his hands they gestured out to me
to let my fears and soul fly free

with painted breath the words he spoke
the joyous feelings within me choaked
to win my heart for he did try
no other man my love could buy

the tender way his love caressed
with subtle fingers me undressed
his searching lips my body did find
his being reached within my mind

to hold him close and feel secure
the fear and guilt I shall endure
no one on earth could ever see
the love this man had just for me

I find in him a friend so dear
I wish he'd be forever near
to feel his breath upon my breast
the things he does will do the rest

Within the mists of time he came
a being whom I'd give a name
his eyes ablaze with burning fire
the warmth within our loves desire




[This message has been edited by Steve Motuel (12-19-2003 05:08 PM).]

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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-12-19 05:11 PM


Awwwww..this is the sweetest thing.. This was just precious..Very romantic. Lovely it was to read.
Terri~
Merry Christmas    

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2003-12-20 10:52 AM


steve,

exceptional writing...i really enjoyed
this very much. you surely have a talent!
Happy Holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-12-22 11:47 AM


This was a beautiful poem and a loving sentiment~

~very nicely done.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-12-22 11:51 AM


Steve  
Very romantic and I enjoyed the read.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2003-12-23 03:37 AM


Well worth the wait~enjoyed

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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