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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-12-19 04:00 PM


**
Hail
Flakes of glass propose
An icy slicker, thicker froze
Coated in their wintry shroud
Wind chimes resonate
Cried Outloud
Calling to the moon
Vibrations blue
A hoped
Rescue
**
Copyright Kkh 12/18/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (12-19-2003 04:02 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-12-19 04:33 PM


Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

jaicie114
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2 posted 2003-12-19 10:34 PM


Wow, TD!

I can hear the tinkling right now!  Thank you for sharing this frozen vision.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

iliana
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3 posted 2003-12-19 10:54 PM


ThisDiamond,

Wuuuuuuu, I think I'll go light the fire place --- you really brought hail to life.  Great writing!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-12-19 11:59 PM


Enjoy the storm. It's always good to read your unique thoughts.
BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-12-20 01:44 AM


Love the white light, Kathleen!!!  
Antonio_L
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6 posted 2003-12-20 02:45 AM


It is beautiful
and it feels lonely
I love it and I will hold it
while I drink mulled cider.

Tony.  

Ericc
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7 posted 2003-12-20 10:58 AM


Beautiful!

Eric

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8 posted 2003-12-20 11:15 AM


Kathleen, I could see the icicle....
And, it was beautiful.
Happy Holidays,
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-12-20 04:40 PM








(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious and may the icicles glisten with starlight crystal this holiday season and reflect the star of Jesus to your heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

vandana
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10 posted 2003-12-20 05:20 PM


enjoyed
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