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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-12-17 10:06 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

This is a combined effort between myself
and a good poet friend named Steve who
posts with me at another site.He begins
with the first verse and mine are the
alternating verses.I was so humbled
that Steve asked to do a duet with me
and the end result brought tears to my eyes.

* * *

My love you're mine I know it's right
I saw it in your eyes tonight
I felt it in the way you kiss
And every day your love I miss

You fill each waking moment
You're a part of all I do
I'd climb the highest mountain
In my quest to be with you

I bless the day we came to be
The day you made the man you see
I kiss the ground on which you walk
My eyes observe you like a hawk

My heart has wings to fly
Feet barely touch the floor
You've unlocked my deep desires
Leaving me breathless for more

My life is nought without your love
We go together like hand in glove
The thought that we might never be
A prisoner of life although I'm free

Your words are my food
As your breath is my wine
Your love intensifies all colors
Like a diamond, how love shines

I feel you close your love entwines
My heart is yours for all of time
There is no one for me but you
Until I die my love is true

Your love loosens my limbs
And beats warm in every vein
It sings sweetly to my heart
And will forever by my gain

I need you here within my life
Maybe as a lover or maybe a wife
It matters not just be for me
I love the way you set me free

I love you more than life itself
My passion burns so deep within
As I await your tender touch
To signal love will soon begin

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-12-17 10:09 PM


Nicely done....pleased to read this...and
wishing you both well.  And thanking your
partner for giving us this blending of two
talents....

Antonio_L
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2 posted 2003-12-18 06:47 AM


Totally beautiful Sue!

Tony.

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3 posted 2003-12-18 07:05 AM


Dear Sue - Thank God you didn't say your friend was Toerag!  That's all I gotta say.  err.... not really... This is a very sweet poem written by hearts in tune.
Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-12-19 03:36 PM


We welcome Steve to Passions!  A delightful duet!
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2003-12-19 03:38 PM


I am sure that Steve is going to be a wonderful addition to Passions, very nice duet you two.
Goodknight
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6 posted 2003-12-19 03:46 PM


a delightful love poem duet - thanks Sue and Steve - Paul
zenny
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7 posted 2003-12-19 03:53 PM


A lovely write, Sue@Steve
*warm hugs*

Steve Motuel
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8 posted 2003-12-20 03:36 AM


All I can say is a big thank you for your comments an I am very pleased to be here!

Sue, the court is now all yours...

Steve

iliana
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9 posted 2003-12-20 03:44 AM


Sue (and Steve, of course) -- this was a beautiful harmony!  Thanks for sharing it with me!                lol.......jo
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10 posted 2003-12-20 02:00 PM


Sue & Steve...A lovely duet. Thanks for sharing...Paul

Steve...Hopefully we will get a chance to read more of your poems soon.

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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11 posted 2003-12-20 02:03 PM


Very beautifully penned you two!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...    

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12 posted 2003-12-20 02:13 PM


This is very beautiful from two wonderfully romantic writers.
You know that I already love to read your poems, Sue...
amd I can tell I will love to read the writings
from Steve, too. Thank you both for sharing this with us.
Hugs to you both,
Ethel

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13 posted 2003-12-20 02:17 PM








(smiles) Yay! Oh Sue and Steve, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friends, I wish you both the happiest holidays, this is a most gorgeous collaboration, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Sue and Steve, thank you both for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Suetang
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14 posted 2003-12-20 08:25 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments and I am sure you will agree that Steve will be a very welcome addition to PIP.

Steve - I thank you so very much for writing with me, it was truly an honour on my part.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

NewEnglandlazurlu
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15 posted 2003-12-20 09:40 PM


Hello Sue and Welcome Steve ... This is beautiful and you write so well together. I enjoyed this very much.

Hugs and Merry Christmas to you both.
Marti

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16 posted 2003-12-22 11:23 PM


Sue:  Very nice combined effort.  I hope we see more of your cooperative poems.

Betty Lou Hebert

Suetang
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17 posted 2003-12-23 03:35 PM


Thank you Marti & Betty Lou

I am so pleased Steve has joined us here and I know you'll make him feel welcome.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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