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Aimster
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0 posted 2003-12-19 02:45 PM


It's Been Your Choice

It's been your choice all along
You made it then and you make it now
Even still I came back to reach out to you
I thought there was something left...somehow

All that remains is a bitter cold wind
Silence echoes all around
Would you even hear me crying
Or realise I've fallen to the ground?

Did you ever care about me
Don't you see, I need to know this
I feel so broken inside, heart and soul tore apart
All of this makes me feel so lifeless

I still wait wondering how you feel
Years from now, I guess I still won't know
For it seems to me that no you don't care
So I guess I will go

Just remember you had a chance
You blew it sky high
So now the choice is mine
From you, I learned how to say good-bye

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

© Copyright 2003 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-12-19 04:41 PM


I so know how this feels. Wonderfully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Aimster
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2 posted 2003-12-20 08:35 AM


thank you for your kind comment.
happy holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

ParisGrl
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3 posted 2003-12-20 07:12 PM


Amy,

I take it this is about Becky.  I'm glad you finally found your answers.  

Take Care,
Laura

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4 posted 2003-12-20 08:07 PM


Very sad, Amy.....some people don't know how to reach out to others. I thought the same thing as ParisGrl. I'm so sorry.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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