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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-12-19 08:35 AM


Cradles turn timelessly, whirling round an alliance, in trajectory

The right hand foaming, turned up towards heaven, to receiving overflowing mercy in azure green

Passing through the heart of depth, transmitted to earth, in energy…the down turned foaming left hand

Warms, while one foot remains firmly on the earth, the other crosses it and propels the dancer round

Into the eyes of life…the mind and soul of time

This gathering can be seen, as a great crescendo, in three phases,

Knowing, seeing and uniting with all, inducing a state of mystical ecstasy

Effortlessly a union with the Celestial, colors of unification’s circle and direction

Introducing deep and diverse influences, remarkably becoming each and every part

Containing core elements…messages unseen and protected in your heart

Illuminating the ear to sounds on fire, where a raw condition ripens

Coming to blossom with the breeze, and inner apertures of survival

Where a wondrous sweetness is sensed, bringing the flute player to our ear

Like waves upon the body…from an all living sea, we are seamen

Being knit together without one stitch…but in a mystic union woven

So sacred is this dance, which pulsates around, where many fires burn

The flame of sea’s voice where the candle shones brightly alive

A dance with percussion, induces love to a design, where in night’s visions

Lays pure light upon every horizon, leading us to the beyond


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1 posted 2003-12-19 08:37 AM



Lovely images, Lee.
Thank you for taking such care
with this beauty.

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2 posted 2003-12-19 08:53 AM


LeeJ,
"The flame of sea’s voice where the candle shones brightly alive

A dance with percussion, induces love to a design, where in night’s visions

Lays pure light upon every horizon, leading us to the beyond."

Good thoughts, good wrie, good read."


iliana
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3 posted 2003-12-19 01:58 PM


Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!  Thank you, this is inspirational!  
ice
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4 posted 2003-12-20 05:29 AM


LeeJ
I think it was Mellville who said...
"When you dance with the sea, she always leads"
Thank you for this dance,where you have lead my mind steps by it's awesome beat...
_______ice
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5 posted 2003-12-20 06:10 AM


I don't know how you do it...your mind is amazing!
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6 posted 2003-12-20 09:54 AM


Lee, this is an exquisite dance!
I could feel the waves of this write spinning me around, my feet touching down upon the sands just long enough to get my bearings.

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7 posted 2003-12-20 10:11 AM


nice read
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