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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-12-19 07:24 AM


Poignant melodious offspring’s, with an intellectual mix
Inspiration fluids, architectural efforts spewing embellishments
Watercolors in lettering arts, dripping with joy and passion
Life’s rhymes, murmuring in your ear, octaves forming humans~
Humans containing one soul, without each other we fly solo
Each milestone is a grand moment burning with creation’s tempo
Whatever touches us increases life…we artists alive
View any beautiful thing, as much as is the soul within him
Increasing, never passing into nothing…sleeping full of dreams
Knocking on our doors, when we least expect them
Wherein our lives are measured, by the dance of a Goddess
Unannounced, a passing shape forms the soul's own blood
Giving form to time, in the vise of a child’s eye
Like a hundred kindnesses offering a cup of wine
Speaking to the psyche…with a golden crown
Where earth and wind cannot turn without the moon
Light sees white…where thorns lay pure and in tune
Within the asylum of the perfumed rose
Intoxicated with the eyes of existence
Sprinkling pre-eternity like a lover of moonbeams
Catching every word, drawing from the storms
Reaching for the hand of love…peacefully conformed


© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-12-19 08:12 AM


This is awesome...
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2 posted 2003-12-19 10:22 AM


very good Lee, well done.
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3 posted 2003-12-19 10:43 AM


LeeJ
A beautiful write, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2003-12-19 10:49 AM


Lee, I enjoyed this very much.
Oh, and I like the picture of you
and the little child.
Hugs,

ice
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5 posted 2003-12-19 09:18 PM


Simply beautiful...Oh, I do like your style.
Themes are always well expressed....:-)
_______ice
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6 posted 2003-12-19 09:33 PM


So beautifully penned Lee.
Love your style lady...amazing!
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

iliana
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7 posted 2003-12-19 11:05 PM


LeeJ -- you need to put a book of verse together and sell it!!  I would buy.  You have such insight!
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8 posted 2003-12-20 03:36 PM


I like this very much, Lee! *S*
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9 posted 2003-12-20 03:57 PM


You write with so much wisdom,  and do it so
eloquently.  Thank You! Give that little
darling an extra hug from all of us.

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10 posted 2003-12-20 04:57 PM








(smiles) I believe if a child grows and always sleeps withhis or her dreams held dear, then the most beautiful blessings of life will be held close to heart forever, yay! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

vandana
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11 posted 2003-12-20 05:19 PM


nice write
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12 posted 2003-12-22 05:22 PM


Very nice Lee...James
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