starlaced - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #30

starlaced

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-12-19 02:03 AM

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Laney
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 85
Illinois

1 posted 2003-12-19 02:22 AM

Snow, this is lovely. I love the whimsical feel. gorgeous write

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2003-12-19 02:54 AM

laney, thank you !

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2003-12-20 05:09 PM

Snow, this is beautiful and needed to be closer to the top so more will read it! BEEEEEEEEwell.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-12-20 05:13 PM

your presentations are always beautiful

M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-12-20 05:37 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may tears of joy that reflect the stars be the prisms that come out of the starlit eyes, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Snow, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2003-12-22 10:02 PM

I really liked the way you described the lily in the picture as "tonguelashed."  Wizard-me was a catchy beginning, as well.
This was pleasant.  With that, a "BUMP"!

Merry Christmas, Snow!
                      Sadelite

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

7 posted 2003-12-22 10:13 PM

thank you all so much !!!
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.