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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-12-19 12:38 PM


porcelain smile
heavier than active hate

the imitation  
provoking replication
of redundant pulse.

my habit of awakening
is painful ritual, a waiting  spell  
another sleep to follow.

she hates awakenings.    


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1 posted 2003-12-19 01:20 AM


Ow, caught in the Xerox machine, eh? It's a party!

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2 posted 2003-12-19 02:56 AM


eventually the cycle ends...that's all I hold onto
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-12-19 03:26 AM


Brilliant
chrissydome
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germany
4 posted 2004-01-01 06:34 AM


what can i say except of "WOW!!!"
steavenr
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5 posted 2004-01-16 12:03 PM


trying to catch up, missed this one.  really love the following:

"porcelain smile
heavier than active hate"

powerful indictment

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6 posted 2004-01-16 12:09 PM


I'm glad this one came back up -- this time it's going into my library. I want to keep it around for a while.

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Gaia
7 posted 2004-01-16 12:28 PM


the imitation  
provoking replication
of redundant pulse.


LOL, loved this one, right there, close to the bone

iliana
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8 posted 2004-01-16 12:57 PM


Thought provoking and well written.  
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