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Ebb Tide
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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the rushing away each wave breaking further out the stranded dying ©2003 by icebox |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Evenin' Box! Sounds like we two are on the same wavelength tonight! /pip/Forum83/HTML/001309.html ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Yes! I noticed that. It is the main reason I posted this. The coincidence made me laugh. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the two of you should do a duet |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
two evening currents... I'm liking this! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahhh...the currents, very much enjoyed your words today. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
but the currents also are the richness which cultivate the soul of the sea...Yes? Good write |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox....I have a picture of me when I was little in a baggy bathing suit...walking into this vast expanse of shallow ocean. I can remember those little waves and feeling like for a minute I had tamed the sea. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
definitley ebb tide, here! love the power of that last line, but glad I know that the new tide will still come Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful wonderful write..so much enjoyed your words today. Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
This might just be the best haiku I've seen from you. Very clean and with a lot behind it. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Icebox There is not all tragedy in those lives left dying, the sea birds gain life by their stranding.. Just as I have gained a few calories of mental sustenance from reading this short poem, That you have left high and dry on this page. Enjoyed this very much _____ice ><> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what an enjoyable write! this is a really good poetic ocean night |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This takes me right back to the shore, where I love to be. Thought provoking observation here. ~K~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
A match! Another one well done!  [This message has been edited by Krawdad (12-20-2003 01:52 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the way you set this up and let it roll on it's on!! icebox~  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Have to agree with Ice and Mr. Fraser on this one. Both are right in my estimation.  |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
"the rushing away each wave breaking further out the stranded dying..." ... and on the morrow the circle of life begins again always it begins again. Tony. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Just like the ocean. Comfortable and peaceful crashing here and there. GIS Application of knowledge is the basis of ability. |
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