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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2003-12-18 10:38 PM

Mud flats in moonlight
shimmering with hidden worms;
the night sound of birds

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-12-18 10:39 PM

Cool write...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-19 03:27 AM

Yes, this is a very neat write.

Hugs,

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-19 03:29 AM

I've been there

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-12-19 06:43 AM

mmmm, this feels like the color brown.
Very good, Sir!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-12-19 06:51 AM

Merry Christmas "you son of the sea"...enjoy your writes and concept very much....reading you is a wonderful place to be...may peace and joy fill your heart...luv and hugs...Lee J.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-12-19 11:47 AM

Ed...The atmesphere in this feels beautiful yet a little lonely.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2003-12-19 11:49 AM

nature at it's best...well done.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2003-12-19 12:00 PM

oooh, EXCELLENT!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-12-19 12:01 PM

Ed - this is really neat - interesting and neat images - Paul

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-12-19 03:26 PM

And with such a few words, you paint a picture so vivid we smell the salt and hear whispers of wings... Superb work, my friend.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2003-12-19 04:13 PM

What's going on in that mind of your Ed?

Enjoyed.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Kazm
Member

since 2003-11-13

Posts 99

12 posted 2003-12-19 04:45 PM

I wish I could write these. Mine never work. I feel like I should be able to becauase of my heritage, but it sure isn't genetic. Sometimes I think it's spirit.

Kaz

Steve Motuel
Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 72
Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany

13 posted 2003-12-19 04:49 PM

I love Haikus, I learnt about them a few months ago and their very addictive!

Well done this one works really well

Steve

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2003-12-19 05:42 PM

RL -- this was very vivid. Good one! This must be a day for birds, huh?

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

15 posted 2003-12-20 01:49 AM

Well done sir!

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

16 posted 2003-12-20 07:43 PM

Oh yeah! Great imagery. I remember hunting nightcrawlers for my grandpa (I earned a penny a worm). I don't remember the birds (maybe I scared them away), but the rest I remember well!
Sadie

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

17 posted 2003-12-20 07:46 PM

I love a good haiku... and I love this one!

Moca

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

18 posted 2003-12-20 08:14 PM

such fond memories you bring to mind.....love this!

thank you
Lauren~

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May the miracle of
Christmas touch your
life with special blessing

H A P P Y H O L I D A Y S

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

19 posted 2003-12-20 09:13 PM

you can feel it,,and,it makes sense,,,,,not all do,,,great,,,,Michelle

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