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Ratleader
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0 posted 2003-12-18 10:10 PM



pillow laughter

as we wake
to find our
feet have
wandered
under
cover
of the
intimate
darkness

and
we
are

holding toes

[This message has been edited by Ratleader (12-19-2003 01:53 AM).]

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icebox
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1 posted 2003-12-18 11:29 PM


Small pleasures endure.

Superb!

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2 posted 2003-12-19 07:11 AM


aw, RatL.
   It toe sweet!  Yuk, bad image.   I'll try again.   This SOOOO sweet.
                 Sadelite

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-19-2003 08:32 AM).]

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-12-19 07:34 AM


hehehhehe, very very mundane yet so profound...what a write sir!  Very much enjoyed!
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4 posted 2003-12-19 07:52 AM


I'm not sure what led me to this fine piece of work?.....but it was indeed not a disappointment....you're as weird as I am in a more intelligible way....LOL..Merry Christmas Rat
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5 posted 2003-12-19 08:16 AM


Heh, I love the way you think.
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6 posted 2003-12-19 08:20 AM


Sounds like fun to me!
Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-12-19 08:39 AM



This!
is a smile
inducer!

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8 posted 2003-12-19 03:22 PM


Sunshine is right... this one leaves smiles. *S* What a loving, delightful write! *S*
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9 posted 2003-12-19 03:27 PM


Ed - made me smile and maybe even a smirk...loved it - Paul
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10 posted 2003-12-19 04:11 PM


and
we
are

holding toes


Heh, I like that..a wonderful image Ed.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Martie
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11 posted 2003-12-19 07:55 PM


Ed...A great way to keep feet warm as well as spirit.  Sweet!
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12 posted 2003-12-19 08:00 PM


WOW!!!!  I love this!!!
*Beaming here*...wonderful warm feelings this evokes.
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

iliana
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13 posted 2003-12-19 11:12 PM


HeHeHe......holding toes, wonderful!  
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Gaia
14 posted 2003-12-20 12:04 PM


LOL, good job!
Toe will be jealous.

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