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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-12-18 08:52 PM




There is no course
the sea just mirrors the sky
both endless and unchartered
reflections of hearts not yet tied
becoming a shared midpoint
upon the meeting of our eyes

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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2003-12-18 10:06 PM


Michele - thought I seen them somewhere...

BC

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-12-18 10:08 PM


Beautifully penned Michele.
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-12-20 07:30 PM


Michele, this is so beautiful,
it needs another go-round....
Happy Holidays, my friend

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark
4 posted 2003-12-20 07:45 PM


When the eyes meet you can see the touch of the soul deep down were the heart is in place.

Smile i enjoyed.

Jes


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
5 posted 2003-12-20 09:51 PM


thanks for reading, appreciated always
bklynboy
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6 posted 2003-12-21 08:41 AM


Our eyes are the mirror to our soul....nice job!
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-12-21 01:03 PM


wow! I've felt this way before....not often but yeah, that's how I saw it too
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