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Kazeru
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since 2003-12-16
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0 posted 2003-12-18 08:42 PM



-Dedicated to Jenny-

I sat alone
Atop my mountain of loneliness
Pondering my life away
I was awake yet not living
Preferring the solitude
Above anything else

Yet so suddenly
An angel appeared
Before my weary eyes
I tried to reach her
To see if she was not
A lonely heart's dream

She noticed me
And my heart was filled
With such pure joy
We talked till the end
Of Old Father Time himself
We did not even care

Still I can't reach her
Yet I am at peace
For I know that she is real
For that angels love
I will wait forever
In the end we'll be together

-End-

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

© Copyright 2003 Jean-Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2003-12-18 08:49 PM


Welcome
and what a beautiful write keep it up
bernie
Happy Holidays

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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2 posted 2003-12-18 09:20 PM


Welcome to Passions, we are excited you have joined us...this is a beautiful first post...

please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly~

Greeneyes~

~~**~~**~~**~~**~~
May the miracle of
Christmas touch your
life with special blessing

H A P P Y  H O L I D A Y S

Suetang
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3 posted 2003-12-18 10:15 PM


Hello Jean-Phillippe

Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us, such a lovely first post.

Welcome to Passions!

"In dreams and in love,
there are no impossibilities"

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (12-18-2003 10:15 PM).]

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4 posted 2003-12-19 02:48 PM


What a beautiful write... Welcome to Passions! *S*
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2003-12-19 02:50 PM


A very nice entrance to Passions, I enjoyed the words and hope to see more from you.  Welcome to the pages of blue.

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
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6 posted 2003-12-19 06:34 PM


Oh yes, she is real all right, and some day you may actually meet her. I met one once upon a time. Hold the dream.



~~J

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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7 posted 2003-12-20 11:18 AM


such a beautiful write...this was so
tender and loving! Welcome to Passions.
I look forward to reading more from you!

happy holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Ericc
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8 posted 2003-12-20 01:50 PM


Exceellent start here at PiP!
These are lovely, inspiring words. I look forward to more.

Eric

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-12-20 01:51 PM


I missed your entrance...forgive me.

Beautiful write!

Welcome to Passions!

Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2003-12-20 02:31 PM










(big angel holiday hugs) This is a very heartfelt debut, sweet friend, I wish for true love to fill your heart and for it to feel like it is Christmas forever, yay, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jean-Philippe, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jean-Philippe, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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