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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-12-18 06:44 PM


When Will Hell Freeze Over

Hello, remember me?
This is James, James who, James Lee.
What's that, you don't care any more.
I thought that much the last time
you walked out my door.
Before that you gave me one of
those looks like I was crazy.
And without you, I just may be.
For a world without you is
undesirable to me.
So, you have to go.
Did I tell you that
I miss your soft touch.
It's been nice talking to you.
Will you please keep in touch?
What's that, you'll call me
when hell freezes over.
I thought that much.

JamesLee
December17
2003
I write of things of
the past and a love
that didn't last.

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (12-18-2003 11:42 PM).]

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Daniel van Vliet
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since 2001-08-31
Posts 80

1 posted 2003-12-18 07:15 PM


..wd, did you give this to the person?
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-12-18 11:43 PM


This is from a ways back in my past...James
Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
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3 posted 2003-12-21 08:06 PM


many people dread that day,,but, just as many look forward to it,,,i'd be just as lost without my true love,,,,,,your words touch deep
take care friend

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Kazeru
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since 2003-12-16
Posts 31

4 posted 2003-12-21 10:32 PM


Sometimes that day comes, and when you least expect it... Hell actually freezes over, I've have seen it happen, I hope it did also for you! Enjoyed your poems very much!
Greetz
Kazeru


->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

[This message has been edited by Kazeru (12-21-2003 10:33 PM).]

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
5 posted 2003-12-21 11:56 PM


Intense, James...

You do so write your feelings well...thank you for sharing!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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