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Open Poetry #30

This love

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

0 posted 2003-12-18 05:23 PM

This love takes me by my insides
It worries me
It takes me down paths
Paths I can’t see the end of

This love takes me
It grips my heart
With its fist full
Of a future
A future I am blind to

This love shakes me
Rattles me and forsakes me
As the tears fall from
Mine eyes

Like a snow globe
I am
All my surroundings
Floating in front of me

I cannot see things
Clearly
My world at peace yet not

In this chaos
This chaos they call
love

This love makes me
As it takes me
And I
weep
I weep
In its presence

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2003-12-18 05:48 PM

Chaos indeed!
Doesn't make any sense at all.

But we surely know we are alive.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-12-18 06:36 PM

NIce writing...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-12-18 06:39 PM

Well done. TD

ranidae_poet
Member

since 2003-11-05

Posts 66
Texas,USA

4 posted 2003-12-19 11:57 AM

thank you,Krawdad

James and TD, happy you enjoyed

thanks for taking time to comment.

There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create.

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