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symphony_of_thoughts
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Somewhere

0 posted 2003-12-18 03:52 PM



Here I am,
Flesh and bone.
Remaining existent,
Upon open eyes.

I had something to say,
But I guess I can't always shine,
Over the brightness of the gleam.
In the other's eyes.

Here I am,
Flesh and bone,
Remaining existent,
Upon open eyes.

I've been building up myself,
Animosity too accompaning me,
Fueling me in my thoughts,
Pushing me to continue.

Here I am,
Flesh and bone,
Remaining existent,
Upon open eyes.

And I don't even care for you
Or you, or you, or you.
I leave it beyond you,
With filthy hands.

[This message has been edited by symphony_of_thoughts (12-18-2003 03:54 PM).]

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Daniel van Vliet
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Posts 80

1 posted 2003-12-18 04:38 PM


Great write... wd.
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2 posted 2003-12-23 04:38 AM


Wash them clean.  Dream it, know it, it will come.
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