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Pain and Rain
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Pain and Rain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Pain and Rain My fetters do not shed the pain Like the feathers of a duck, the rain Nor do my feet have web of toe To swim the waters that I know My prowess is of small domain Perhaps a little bit insane But more or less I do my best This candle light of life’s invest We all relate to human fate Though some of us would charge the gate And some of us would sit and pray And some would shrug the day away And some of us would just invent A cup of dreams, or sip repent But I for one would peel the rind And seek the bind of human blind We are a part of chaos time We need but see and feel the rhyme. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Good morning Seymour  I love being your first replier. LOL And I love feeling your rhyme, too!! LOL Thanks for sharing your wonderful rhymes with us. Have a good day!!  Hugs,   |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And yet here you are, spinning in time to the rhythm and rhyme of the universe. It's good to read you again m'friend. Now gimme dat hug!  and btw? I really liked this part alot: "We all relate to human fate Though some of us would charge the gate And some of us would sit and pray And some would shrug the day away And some of us would just invent A cup of dreams, or sip repent But I for one would peel the rind And seek the bind of human blind" I'm so moody I can run that gamut in two minutes on a good day. (er...or izzat a bad day?) snuggle hugs, sy!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl And I love your replies, Happy Holiday sweet. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, For that you get a big   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you know, I think after reading this, what it all comes down to is what works best for each individual person..as we all have our destiny to reach...if we so chose...we are all on different levels...one no better then the other, simple, humble...yet marvelously unique...and that my dear poet, is what I've read in your words this morning. Thank you....hugs and smiles |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ And you my friend are humble but not simple. LOL Happy Holiday |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My prowess is of small domain Perhaps a little bit insane But more or less I do my best This candle light of life’s invest YES! I needed to read this... you just wrote a part of my life.. love it. morning Sy |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"We are a part of chaos time We need but see and feel the rhyme." Indeed, and well put thoughts for the day. ~K~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
and I enjoy reading what you peel away and show in rhyme, Sy. Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Breaststroke... and then warm yourself with some Irish Cream in your coffee... along with a muffin... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy - Your peoms NEVER disappoint me. Your gift for the words you use is unmatched. *perk* Breast stroke? Why don't I get those kind of offers? [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (12-18-2003 09:16 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy! I have something special in your tea today. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Thank you dear and a Happy Holiday to you and yours. Kahlil Thank you and have a good Holiday. scorpio, Thank you and have a good Holiday. Sunshine, You are a ray of sunshine. LngJhnAg, I don't know, you tell me. You and Mrs lovely have a good Holiday. Nancy, And whose spirit would that be? LOL |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this is such a cool write Sy! I'm going to start calling you the King of Cool  Happy Holidays, Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster How nice, thank you sweet. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"We are a part of chaos time We need but see and feel the rhyme." Sey, I agree. What a great verse you penned today -- all the way I see it, too. Poets are sometimes confused with prophets. . . with this write, I might see why. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana, A flattering reply, thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
My fetters do not shed the pain Like the feathers of a duck, the rain Nor do my feet have web of toe To swim the waters that I know I enjoyed the contrast of fetters/feathers . Incredible write through and through! I could have copied the whole poem, but thought I'd save room for someone else!!! Sadie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, You are a doll. Sadie, Your read and coment is my pleasure. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - your words are of a poet, your heart is of rhymne, your poems are filled with thoughts... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill Nice comment thank you Bill |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But more or less I do my best And your best is simply superb. *S* I like this very much, my friend! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweet. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
any Randy smooches left for a very tardy moth?? Im checking in late Sy-babes.. its a looney bin around here these days. but no worries...me winkies are still working. LOL  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, All the smooches and winkiewinkies you want. WWRS |
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