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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 In time, the sound of your voice will fade from the depths of my soul this torturous ache for your touch will ease...... You won’t be there, when I dream scattering my emotions across the night, staining my morning with tears.... And this love..... will find a worthy heart as mine is healed, of you .....in time..... ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan! So softly and gently penned. Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so pretty, Sea. Time does heal all.... or that's what I've heard?? Hugs,  |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Emotional healing at its best. This is a strong one, SEA. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautiful healing piece  so good to read your words again! |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Sea, so sweetly sad. I hope you heal soon. MERRY CHRISTMAS! Tony.  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan, so beautiful is this!! such a lovely reflection of your heart! gentle hugs my sweet friend...and you are right... in time. Happy Holidays, Amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA A soft lovely write. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
softly sad and the images evoke lots of emotion - I enjoyed your poetry - Paul |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Susan! Very well done! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~SEA~ I hope with all my heart that time will be swift in it's passing. This is such a beautiful poem, it's enough to make me break down and cry my eyes out. (so what else is new) Merry Christmas and lots of hugs to you Susan. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"the sound of your voice will fade from the depths of my soul this torturous ache" So true a feeling said so clearly........ Thanks. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hey thanks you guys for the sweet words... I am fine, this was a "remember when" kind of thing for me....time does heal.....and most know, I did find that worthy heart, in my hubby peace and love to you all, hope everyone has a fantastic Christmas! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
No time is enough...though it can happen in a heartbeat. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
 and today had started out so bright! i like this. it renders itself to ready association by virtually anyone. the tone worked well for expressing the logical understanding that "some day" it would be better, while feeling that "right now" ... well, sucks! hugs susanofer, glad you don't live this. glad you wrote it.  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ps: isn't a complete lack of rhyme absolutely wonderful? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely written ;kiss: |
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