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Open Poetry #30

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-12-17 04:48 PM

Stranded by the stars
she will not wear
her crown tonight,
the moon turns her face
looking downwards
seeking to be consoled,
but i can only offer
more tears of my own

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-17-2003 07:48 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-12-17 05:09 PM

well I am finally over my tearful period..at least for this week

nice write, Michele
hugs
M

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2003-12-17 05:18 PM

Oooooooooooooo, don't be sad. You write so beautifully.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-12-17 07:42 PM

thanks kids
maureen, thanks for the laugh...i liked that

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-12-17 09:08 PM

Yea I know, but I'll take whatever I can get....
Seeing that misery loves good company!

Nice write girlielocks~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-12-18 06:44 PM

You bring such an edge to whatever you write Michelle. Such a waterfall, spilling happy or sad. Love to read you. TD

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-12-18 06:47 PM

NIce writing...James

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-12-18 07:58 PM

thanks again
so nice of you to say TD
thanks you too james

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