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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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With You I am warmed by the coolness of the rain as it changes to snow, covering the view through my window. For I am lifted to another plane, with dreamlike qualities paraphrasing my life. With two hearts meeting, hand in hand walking, prints to a never ending story. There is light in my dark, and acceptance in my heart and an emptiness to fill... with you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
There is light in my dark, and acceptance in my heart and an emptiness to fill... with you. such melancholy feel to this M. Happy holidays to you. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww...wow, this is so wonderful!  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved the phrase: "dreamlike qualities paraphrasing my life" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HelloDearFriend~ I LIKE this one bunches~ Beautifully written~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Honey, unbutton that blouse and let me at that heart....okay?...Aww c'mon..be a sport......nice write sweets.... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that echoing ache, i hear you in this loud and clear |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Firstly>you been drinkin' Toe? funny guy  actually I am wearing a pullover top with no buttons to undo... Donna, oh it isn't so bad..after awhile you aren't lonely anymore...just alone Have a wonderful holiday season! Thank you SEA..where have you been hiding? hugs M steavenr, thank you for stopping by. Marge~ oh I thought it was time to perk myself up with a "feel good" poem. Thank you ((hugs)) M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"For I am lifted to another plane, with dreamlike qualities paraphrasing my life" ........ loved this line! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Maureen. Absolutely beautiful! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beatiful poem. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"I am warmed by the coolness of the rain as it changes to snow, covering the view through my window." Good to find this warmth in your words today. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Bringing opposites together, so that the combination means more than either. That's poetry! And some happy (naked)thoughts! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you iliana *s...I sort of liked that line, too. Denise, hi there, nice to see you. Hope you have a very Merry Christmas! And thank you for the visit. Hugs M Sue, hugsss my friend. Kraw, I am glad you could see and/or feel the warmth in my words.  M Ed, when you are not visitng Earth...where do you hail from? (just curious) thank you, it's a pleaure to have you read me. M |
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