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chinesestone
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since 2003-06-04
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China

0 posted 2003-12-17 01:16 AM


¡¡


I don't know how i miss you


the whole day

i just

reading

Listen to the music

count the sparrow

that

voyaging the white roof



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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-12-17 04:25 AM


very beautiful
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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honolulu, hawaii
2 posted 2003-12-18 05:38 AM


yes
very beautiful,
so quiet butlike a warm rainy day

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-12-18 06:54 PM


NIce writing....James
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4 posted 2003-12-18 11:55 PM


Serene...I like this very much.

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