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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Dusting between every flake of snow is a whisper of your name an echo that softly bounces off white a gentle reminder tenderly tickling my skin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short and sweet, very powerful |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
That's why a gentle snowfall brings such a welcome hush There are whispers to be heard . . . |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Sounds to me like the softest roar possible. But then again it is winter, when softness is most appreciated. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Magical. Why "dusting"? Love, Margherita |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a magical poem - your poetry is very special - loved it Paul |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I can remember well how quiet it can be when the snow falls. You described this perfectly. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ Do you know how delicately beautiful this is ???? VERY *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Helen! ( You remember snow?) Eric |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...and touches to be felt... ~K~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is so lovely Helen. I do hope you are feeling better. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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