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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-12-16 09:24 AM



    


Come home for winter
Our snows will melt much too soon
Just once, I would like
To leave our footprints in white
Capturing fantasy’s light



[This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-16-2003 09:27 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-12-16 09:29 AM


Sunshine
A delight to see and read.

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2 posted 2003-12-16 10:00 AM


Aww...how lovely Karilea. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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3 posted 2003-12-16 10:00 AM


nice read
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4 posted 2003-12-16 10:08 AM


Aahhhh...your words are the footprints of beauty left behind. They we may always revisit.
Thank you!

Eric

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5 posted 2003-12-16 10:23 AM


Karilea...How lovely they look all dressed in white.  Beautifully expressed!
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6 posted 2003-12-16 11:06 AM


My, you certainly look sparkling radiant in your new photo! Your smile is going to reflect hundreds ~ thousands! ~ of smiles back to you!

Your poem is truly a little gem ~ starting with the first two words, "Come home"...

Loves, hugs, 'n smiles,
Linda

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7 posted 2003-12-16 11:25 AM


Nice tanka!
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8 posted 2003-12-16 11:27 AM


OH this is lovely!
Tanka very much!
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

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9 posted 2003-12-16 11:50 AM


A beautiful picture, Karilea.

Yes, we have snow also and more on its way by the end of the week.

I love it when it is falling.

*s
M

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10 posted 2003-12-16 11:57 AM


Karilea...How could anyone refuse an invite like that. Lovely poem & picture...Paul
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11 posted 2003-12-16 01:08 PM


how gorgeous!

makes me want to go to Virginia with my brother

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12 posted 2003-12-16 07:20 PM


love your vision and yes those first footsteps to capture are bliss
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13 posted 2003-12-16 07:34 PM


Beautiful ....

Hugs, Marti

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14 posted 2003-12-17 01:17 PM


Very nice! A wonderful thought, to leave an imprint upon a "clean page."

I have to admit, though, other than when I want to build a snowman...I like to leave pristine snow as it is, it is so beautiful that way.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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