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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-12-16 05:48 AM


Sitting quietly waiting,we steadily make our way through the green and pleasant countryside,bathed in streaming sunshine.

Staring from the window of the train, i survey the white clouds gently rolling by, as a love so full is in this heart of mine.

Then suddenly you appear to me, a vision of beauty.
Dressed in an elegant Burgandy dress, you take your place at the table in front of me, i smile hello and take your hand while looking into your eyes.

We order from the menu, and sit sipping cool champagne, it's bubbles tickling our noses, we chat softly and stare out at the early evening skies.

Eating our meal, my eyes do not leave yours, darkly they smoulder, the light from the lamp on the table frames your face and iluminates the table cloth and richly upholstered seats.

Telling you how lovely you look, a smile so wide, so affecting, beams on your face, inside my chest my heart quickens it's beat.

Now the moon shines silvery through the carriage windows, illuminating our love from it's celestial height.

We retire to our sleeper, and i undress your perfect body.
Our love will be special, our love will be beautiful, our love will last all through the night.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-12-16 05:53 AM


My love a train ride with you through life is what I desire most of all....to ride together through the ups and downs of life...

Just brilliant....so wonderfully written, what number is this my love the 99th poem for me?


I LOVE IT!
xxxxx~love ARH


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-16-2003 06:28 AM).]

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-12-16 05:57 AM


I coame back to read again....wow! this is awesome!....I loved every line and within reading it...each line took me deeper...drawing me in like a fish..hook line and sinker!

~love ARHxxxxxxx Vermilion Queen


A Romantic Heart
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passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-12-20 06:07 AM


alright...so when's the wedding?
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