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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-12-16 03:39 AM

This
a shifting of the sand
emery of fingerskin
try to make it form a shape
pouring like a sieve
I ache
to see it all
there at my feet
truth in move
a thrift of truth
vowing grit
of the grandstand
I wish I knew
I wish
I knew

what little children understand...

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (12-16-2003 03:43 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-12-16 03:40 AM

I wish I knew too

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

2 posted 2003-12-16 04:27 AM

I wish I just understood.

Great write, K.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-12-16 08:25 AM

Karen I think most little ones understand far more than adults do because they still have such an innocence to them. (hmm....wondering if thats why I still understand so much....lol...

)

Would but we could all harness some of their understanding I am sure the world would be a much better place.
Wonderful write Seren...

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-12-16 09:08 AM

"I ache
to see it all
there at my feet
truth in move
a thrift of truth
vowing grit
of the grandstand
I wish I knew
I wish
I knew

what little children understand..."

Great write Ser.
I wish I knew as well....
Love ya lady!
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-12-16 09:12 AM

The innocence of children
is simply amazing...
they take EVERYTHING
at face value.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-12-16 09:48 AM

enjoyed

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

7 posted 2003-12-16 10:00 AM

Great write, Serenity...

And I think we can understand if we just open ourselves up to accept it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

8 posted 2003-12-16 10:06 AM

...but you do know; when you awake in the quiet dark, before you gather your mind back into this life's familiar personality, you know at least for a few moments each time.

*smile*

Nightshade