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you are such a coward
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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It angers me that you lie and smile at the same time and you never miss breathing in and out as if everyone should step aside whenever you want room to roam as if the world were your private home you are such a coward when it comes to speaking up in defense of anyone other than YOUR SELF go tell your lies to someone who might be willing to sit still long enough to listen I'm outta here, with another earache |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh good!!! Not sure what to say, except that you wrote some hard truths, and said it nicely...sorta, kinda~ (or nicer than I ever did) Better to eat a slice of humble pie, than it is to let it spoil and rot!! You go sweet thing!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, and it's not even about me or any personal relationship. Would you believe it all started as a political rant??????????????? You don't have to answer that.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Whoooah!!!! Someone's in trouble! Right to the point in such an eloquent way. "and you never miss breathing in and out" "with another earache" . . . really liked these lines. |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
Awww Midnite, that was beautifully honest and sincere poem you wrote. I like it alot. quote: Beautiful yet intriguing stanza, if you're feeling bad don't be afraid to talk to me  Aim - TrialByDisaster ICQ - InProfile MSN - Childoflight55@hotmail.com |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
THANKS Iliana, for that reply.  Yes, sometimes I vent.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I'm not one who has a reputation for being afraid to talk. sometimes, it's even been my downfall. SIGH, my mouth has been banished more than once. But I always walk away with the last laugh. |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
Good for you, as long as it makes you feel better |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, thanks. I never really know 'till the next day if it makes me feel better or not.  Would you believe I suffer from migraines? LOL, they are probably from my bad habit of tying myself into knots. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you go girl! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kacy, wow! Can I apply some of this to my own life? Wanna give me lessons in how to not listen, sometimes I believe I need it desperately.....Powerful write hon. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
i heard that...you go! sounds like you got some things out of your system though, which is always good! take care and happy holidays, amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, yes, Donna, you can do it too when necessary. thanks friends, for standing alongside me |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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