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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-12-16 01:35 AM



Holidays,
And voices laden down
Are singing “Silent Night”
Children dance around
Adoring Christmas lights…
And I peer through an empty window.

Smiles sparse,
And family few.
Years have passed,
But I’m still missing you…

Seems it’s just
A silent night…
Again.

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-12-16 01:40 AM


Aw, want me to scream a little, break through the silence? Heart hugs, and happy holiday wishes to you dear GG.
iliana
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2 posted 2003-12-16 02:30 AM


Really expressive and to the point.  Hope you are not lonely this holiday.  My thoughts are with you.


passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-12-16 04:07 AM


The holidays stink!
Aimster
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4 posted 2003-12-16 08:58 AM


alyssa,

powerfully sad write...
hoping the best for you this
holiday season!

take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-12-16 10:38 PM


Nice writing...James
GG
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6 posted 2003-12-19 06:44 PM


Midnitesun,
that'd be nice! lol I think I've done my share of screaming already. Hugs to you, and thank you.

iliana,
its just another day, I'll be as I always am. Thanks for your reply

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

GG
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Lost in thought
7 posted 2003-12-19 06:51 PM


Dix,
amen to that. And I'm not one of those ones that tries to make Christmas ok because of Christ. That isn't where its origins start, they're all pagan and its all commercialized... I celebrate Jesus everyday but holidays just plain suck!!!
err had to vent, thanks for your reply

Amy,
hope you enjoy them also... thanks for your reply, always so sweet  

James,
thank you glad you think so.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

[This message has been edited by GG (12-19-2003 06:52 PM).]

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