Flying Lessons or Knowing Your Flight Log

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Flying Lessons or Knowing Your Flight Log

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-12-15 03:01 PM

Flying Lessons or Knowing Your Flight Log

look
you truly
do not
understand
my heart

I have
dreams
with wings
painfully taught
in lessons

afraid
alone and broken
I learned
to fly

I am now
unable to sit
breath suspended
in your
uncompromisization
on ragged
rough angles

disappointing
my life

on the possibility

of waiting
for edges
that may
never melt
to smooth

real love is
not
in the
take off
it is in
the landing

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (12-15-2003 03:19 PM).]

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

1 posted 2003-12-15 03:22 PM

h
As I'm sure I have said before, you are indeed skilled at endings. This one is wise as well.

[[[hugs]]] for your disappointment

s.a.g.

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (12-15-2003 03:40 PM).]

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-12-15 05:38 PM

powerful description of the struggles of love - you write for the deep self - loved it - Paul

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