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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-12-15 11:55 AM



Photo By Ethel_GG

~*~
Even when we are apart
and distance feels so far
We are still together, Love
for I am where you are

You can feel me near
in the evening breeze
I am right there with you
in the wind through the trees

Or in the clouds above
high up in the skies
Look real close, my Love
you will see me through your eyes

And when you feel a flutter
deep within your heart
Remember, it is me right there
for of you, I am a part
~*~


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1 posted 2003-12-15 11:57 AM


Love this garsgirl. Love  it, love it, love it. Wonderful piece of poetry here. Well done dear friend!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-15 12:07 PM


Thanks very much! I'm glad that you
liked my poem.

Jes
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3 posted 2003-12-15 12:12 PM


Tells an angels story

Sad but still smiling.

I liked it.

Smile

Jes


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4 posted 2003-12-15 12:13 PM


How very beautiful dear Ethel!
Your muse is in fine form today it seems!
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

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5 posted 2003-12-15 12:18 PM


Very touching. It touched my heart as my true love is far far away, but always here in my heart.
Beautiful piece of poetry.

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6 posted 2003-12-15 12:37 PM


nice write...but yeah, I'll be glad when the holidays are over with
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7 posted 2003-12-15 01:34 PM


Always soft and lovely Ethel. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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8 posted 2003-12-15 01:43 PM


Ethel...

Very soft and nice.  Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

carol
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9 posted 2003-12-17 11:01 AM


Hi Ethel,
I know that Gary will like your poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Carol

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10 posted 2003-12-17 11:06 AM


Even when we are apart
and distance feels so far
We are still together, Love
for I am where you are

and...as it should be...another lovely write, warmth sent across the waves to the heart of another...also giving all of us the insight to your closeness...hugs and smiles...Lee J.

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11 posted 2003-12-17 01:23 PM








(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and because you always feel together in spirit, you are bound to soon enough be together forever as love brings everything together, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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12 posted 2003-12-18 11:46 PM


Mere distance? Not a problem. Love can travel that far between heartbeats, if miles are the only separation.

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13 posted 2003-12-19 02:54 PM


And when you feel a flutter
deep within your heart
Remember, it is me right there
for of you, I am a part
~*~

This is so lovely... and so loving. *S*

GG
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14 posted 2003-12-19 07:24 PM


so soft and sweet
this is beautiful as always

Always, Alyssa

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...I am a girl of tears.

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15 posted 2003-12-19 08:58 PM


Very nice romantic poetry, much better than I have read on most romantic greeting cards...you should try to sell this to Hallmark, GG
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