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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2003-12-15 01:13 AM



caught
painstakingly sought
a hollowed out hole
chamber of an absent mole...

fully clothed
stuffed wrapped robe
a sad catch
down an adobe hatch...

it's time to fervently reconstruct
whatever other purges one might conduct
bearded savages may be picked from holes
accessed by a slide down the nearest pole...

caught
painstakingly sought
exposed to the light of day
now will peace come to stay?






[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-15-2003 01:20 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-12-15 01:20 AM


I do know one thing for certain, that definitely was not a "hallowed" hole!

Timely write! Hot off the presses!


EA

ecrivan
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2 posted 2003-12-15 01:25 AM


no a  hell hole suitable for leaders on their way there


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-12-15 01:31 AM


lol That's a good one, Dear Writer!

Good night!

EA

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
4 posted 2003-12-15 01:49 AM


No peace, great write

Jason

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-12-15 02:38 AM


great new style Martin! I love this!
ecrivan
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6 posted 2003-12-15 10:09 PM


Naturally peace doesn't last, perhaps less so because of the conviction of doing good
at the expense of other cultures...that can't be understood, let alone accepted.


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