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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-14 11:56 PM



I dared to touch
the breath
of time…

To simply hold
our sacred moment
for one
second
longer.

I dared to whisper
the name
of love…

To divinely bless
that fleeting second
when we
became
One.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2003 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-12-15 12:05 PM


Sounds like it was worth the risk!
Pretty poetry, jaicie~

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2003-12-15 12:10 PM


great opening stanza.  Lovely poem
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-12-15 12:17 PM


~ a divine breath of time!


EA

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-12-15 02:54 AM


sometimes we all have to take risks...

this is a beautiful write here jc

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
5 posted 2003-12-15 08:00 AM


Blues, steaven, EA, passing...

Thank you for your wonderful comments. I truly appreciate them.

Hope you each have a splendid holiday season.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-12-15 08:08 PM


Beautiful...simply beautiful.


Love,
Eric

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
7 posted 2003-12-15 11:09 PM


Thank you, my dear...

You know what it means coming from you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
8 posted 2003-12-16 09:12 AM


oh gosh, how pretty is this...
you have a beautiful heart and
it shows!
Happy Holidays,
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
9 posted 2003-12-16 09:44 AM


Oh, thank you, Amy...

What a sweet comment! I wish you a warm and wonderful holiday as well.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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