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Aimster
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0 posted 2003-12-14 09:25 PM


You are the one who I wake up with in the morning
The one who my heart beats with at night
With you I've learned so much about love and life
You are my forever precious guiding light

I never knew I could love this much
You have true beauty inside
You are the most amazing person I've ever known
From you, my true feelings I'll never hide

I promise to you today and forever
I'll only love you
For it's when we are together
That all my dreams come true

Time could not erase how I feel
Or the love that you and I share
And during this holiday season and forever
I'll always be there

Tenderness melts my heart
As I look deep in your eyes
Together in sweet bliss we are
Just you and I

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

© Copyright 2003 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Estel
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1 posted 2003-12-14 09:40 PM


This is a very sweet poem, and puts your emotions and feelings into it superbly.

Congratulations on having such a strong love!

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Gaia
2 posted 2003-12-14 09:51 PM


Beautiful write!
Antonio_L
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3 posted 2003-12-14 10:27 PM


I agree, that was beautifully expressed Amy. I hope he knows how lucky he is.

Tony.  

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4 posted 2003-12-14 10:39 PM


what a beautiful heart you share, not only for love but with love..... lady
Lauren~

~~**~~**~~**~~**~~
May the miracle of
Christmas touch your
life with special blessing

H A P P Y  H O L I D A Y S

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-12-14 10:42 PM


What beautiful words...
What lovely thoughts.
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

Paul Wilson
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6 posted 2003-12-15 08:38 AM


Amy...Very Tender words forom a caring heart. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Aimster
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7 posted 2003-12-15 08:42 AM


thank you all for your heart-felt and
tender words...I have the most amazing
person in the world for a partner, and
it's both with honor and happiness that
I share her with all of you!

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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8 posted 2003-12-15 10:20 AM


Amy this is really really sweet!! She is lucky to have you
iliana
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9 posted 2003-12-15 10:47 AM


Sure sounds like love to me.  What a tender poem!


passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-12-15 12:47 PM


wonderful!
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