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jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-14 07:59 PM



The softness
of your soul
stokes the fire
inside my breast…

The flame
grows
brighter

As I surrender
to the desire
of touching you…

Just
one
more
time.

Of feeling your heart
tap out the rhythm
of my destiny…
Of sensing your Light
fill every tiny crevice
of my being…

Of reaching for that
which I cannot have.

Yet, knowing…

It was mine
all along.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2003 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-12-14 11:33 PM


Well done.
TD

Fire Fairy
Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43
Australia
2 posted 2003-12-14 11:47 PM


Jaicie... so beautifully romantic!

I could taste every one of your sweet words. The lay out of the poem was perfect for the words too... almost like falling...

Thank you beautiful girl for sharing such a stunning piece.

steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

3 posted 2003-12-14 11:49 PM


yes...a very romantic, beautiful write.
jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
4 posted 2003-12-14 11:55 PM


TD, Fire, steaven...

Thank you so much for your nice comments. I truly appreciate them.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-12-15 03:08 AM


a very passionate write...I enjoy you
jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
6 posted 2003-12-15 07:55 AM


Thank you, passing...

I'm always thrilled when you reply to my work.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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