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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Keeping smudged I see myself there in the distance burning as blue and orange as the thing designed to protect who has made me keeper of the flame when cold bites at me uncontrollably sitting at feet as ghost dogs gnaw nightly growling to moons in flesh crawl moan bouncing off midnight sky breaking and scattering to earth all to uphold a promise un-kept to me |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you write wonderful images and powerful feelings - this is a great poem - Paul |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful and stark |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
I'll have to come back to this . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sort of dark...hope you are ok |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Amazing work, as always... |
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