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serenities_blood
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since 2003-12-21
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New Zealand

0 posted 2003-12-22 12:07 PM


My lips are sealed
I won't release anything
My anger will build up, but i will not care
i will look ahead to the time when i can feel again
when i can breathe
and when i can love
My lips are sealed
your taste cannot leave this mouth
i will remember you for all of time
i will look ahead to the time when i can hold again
when i can laugh
and when i can cry
My lips are sealed
but now i hold the burden of your lies
now i see what goes on when i am not around
i will look ahead to the time when i can speak again
when i can let this lie loose
and when i can be freed.
My lips are sealed.

xoxLORxox

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Kazeru
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since 2003-12-16
Posts 31

1 posted 2003-12-22 12:24 PM


I know this feeling all too well, and all though remembering your love and treasuring it is a great thing to do, sometimes letting go is the better way...
Take care Serenities_Blood, I hope that the day you can speak again may come soon!
Greetz
Kazeru

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

serenities_blood
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
2 posted 2003-12-22 01:24 AM


Thankyou again
You seem to be replying to a lot of my poetry. Thank you once again

xoxLORxox

Michelle_loves_Mike
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3 posted 2003-12-22 03:19 PM


true, we've all felt the bitter sting of a lie,,,,,,well put,,,take care
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-16 10:33 PM


Oh my gosh, the emotion that was present with this write was very real!
garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-01-16 10:52 PM


but now i hold the burden of your lies
now i see what goes on when i am not around
i will look ahead to the time when i can speak again
when i can let this lie loose
and when i can be freed.
My lips are sealed


Laura, this is a very powerful write....
very emotional!!
Ethel

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-01-19 07:09 PM


Nice write of emotions...James
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2004-01-19 07:18 PM


Laura~
I got caught up in this emote from your heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Kristin Eve
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8 posted 2004-01-19 08:07 PM


this made me cry it was so real...
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