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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2003-12-14 06:37 PM


Shades of my life have passed
where a girl in bumble bee dress
believed not in Santa Claus
nor the Christmas tree

though the spirit of Christmas
was always alive in her heart
the spirit of giving of loving
and cherishing

my family would sing along with me
straight from their stained mouths
of rough wine

they were easy drinkers

I would see the bright star
know it would lead me to Jesus
through his angels

everyday angels




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (12-14-2003 06:45 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-12-14 06:54 PM








(smiles) Yay! Oh Maree, I just saw your gorgeous challenge and that is a beautiful idea, yay! (angel holiday hugs) I don't have a digital camera, but it doesn't mean I don't have a special Christmas tree to share, yay!

I
look
up to the
top of the tree,
wondering,
do angels linger,
closer than one imagines
perhaps right there over you,
in your own living room
with eyes beaming young glee,
graceful as the red ribbon worn proud,
in the soft hair of this girl
who feels the burning of the candlelight,
and sees the heart of Jesus beating in the stars?
Tonight,
that is
inevitable

(smiles) Yay, God Bless You, your tree is sooooooo pretty, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maree, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-14-2003 06:55 PM).]

Martie
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2 posted 2003-12-14 06:57 PM


Maree

And it is through that loving and cherishing that everyday angels are made, like you!  

Martie
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3 posted 2003-12-14 07:02 PM


Also, tagging along on your post, this is an old poem about Christmas in my childhood.

Ornaments of love


Now the sun a twinkle gives
while catching dew in morning's sieve
and lemons on a lemon tree
are ornaments of love to me

Here early morning December brings
skies cleaned by Santa Ana’s wing
the flowing invisible angel wind
that leaves the air a sparkling

And after night and winter’s chill
brings crisp and clean to the browning hills
I remember well the Christmas tree
and icicles tossed so merrily

Thrown by random hands of four
while laughter sang and fire roared.
My memory stores a family song
with mother on the piano strong

and brother somber hiding there
under the stool where he could share
the movement of the peddles fast
the soft persistent brother task

Then I would sing the carols all
so grand and loud the notes did fall
that candles flickered and gramps woke-up
and father clapped as I stood up

The memory of an angel bright
that graced the room a holy sight
made of laughter and dressed in song
so large with us the family throng

and what had made her presence known
wasn’t wrapped but fully shown
by us together in a place
where love herself saw fit to grace.

Now the sun a twinkle gives
while catching dew in morning's sieve
and lemons on a lemon tree
are ornaments of love to me
___
thanks Maree

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4 posted 2003-12-14 07:49 PM


While I can't quite capture Martie's personal magic, I can share this...



Angels sought a song
A hymn to the Lord and Son
Still the candles burn
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2003-12-14 11:41 PM


Ahhh Noah, your tree is wonderful and your poem beautiful thank you so much for sharing.
May love and light always shine upon you too

Martie, thank you. What a delightful Christmas during your childhood. Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing

Karilea, your Haiku captured the magic of Christmas beautifully. What a gorgeous tree you have. Thank you for sharing Sunshinygirl.



M

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-12-23 11:52 AM


Maree, I had to look for your poem.
This is beautiful, and I love your tree.
It really does look real!!  
Hugs and Happy Holidays,  
Ethel

(I've written a poem about Christmas trees, but the picture is just one that I thought would go with the poem, not my own.)

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-12-23 11:58 AM


Dark Angel
Picture and poem just beautiful.

Aimster
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8 posted 2003-12-23 03:10 PM


Maree,

beautiful poem you wrote here, and you
are truly one of those angels my dear
friend!

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

vandana
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9 posted 2003-12-23 06:42 PM


merry christmas
jaicie114
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10 posted 2003-12-23 09:30 PM


Maree...

Thank you so much for sharing your Christmas spirit with us here. It warms my heart and makes me feel especially blessed.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

jwesley
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11 posted 2003-12-23 10:30 PM


This was wonderful, my friend!

jwesley

BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2003-12-24 12:42 PM


though the spirit of Christmas
was always alive in her heart
the spirit of giving of loving
and cherishing

Oh Maree, you shine so bright,
for being such a dark angel~
Who would have ever guessed!  lol~  
Hugs, you~



vlraynes
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13 posted 2003-12-24 12:52 PM



Beautiful, Maree...the poem, and you...

Happy Holidays, my friend...hugs...

"So here I am with pockets full of good intentions
But none of them will comfort me tonight..."
~The Carpenters

Margherita
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14 posted 2003-12-24 01:12 PM


Precious memories, beautifully told.
Love and light.
Merry Christmas.
Margherita

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