navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #30 » When An Old Love Comes New - (once more)
Open Poetry #30
Post A Reply Post New Topic When An Old Love Comes New - (once more) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-12-14 05:50 PM



When An Old Love Comes New

~*Marge Tindal*~

When an old love comes new
and smiles just for you
You realize while smiling through tears
that he wears the same eyes
you've dreamed of for years~

When an old love comes round
with laughter and song
singing classics he wrote
with notes that belong
to memories made before it was known
he was meant to sing them
for you all along~

When an old love burns new
in embers revived
touched by the breeze
on softly-felt sighs~

You know that the song is meant to be sung
in gentle notes of treasured renew
bringing raptured pleasure
to be shared by two~



*Repost from two years, one month and seventeen days ago*
~Because my heart is filled~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2003-12-14 05:57 PM


beautiful poem.  I especially liked the line:

"singing classics he wrote
with notes that belong
to memories made before it was known
he was meant to sing them
for you"

classy and classic line.

Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
2 posted 2003-12-14 05:59 PM


This is beautful Marge. When old love is new.
Ah.....The beauty, the warmth. Such a wonder.
Love and Hugs
Bon-Bon

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2003-12-14 06:19 PM


Marge/sis

~Because my heart is filled~

The above makes me smile.  

Charisma
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906
lost in blue pages
4 posted 2003-12-15 04:40 PM


awwww beautiful lady your words are poetry indeed.....I always enjoy to read your beautiful thoughts,

((hugs))
Charisma

skyshine
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars
5 posted 2003-12-15 04:42 PM


Some songs are meant to be sung forever.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2004-01-02 01:19 PM


Friends~
Thank you ALL .. my joy is complete~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
7 posted 2004-01-03 09:13 AM


bringing raptured pleasure
to be shared by two~


Yes, dear Marge, your heart is filled with love to overflow and you show it beautifully.

Love, Margherita

Charisma
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906
lost in blue pages
8 posted 2004-01-03 09:54 AM


awwwww Marge how beautiful penned, you write from your loving heart.

Happy New Year to you and your beloved ones.


Charisma

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2004-01-03 10:08 AM


Marge,

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
10 posted 2004-01-03 02:15 PM


funny how good we are at counting the days

love to you

Joyce Johnson
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
11 posted 2004-01-03 02:36 PM


Dear Marge  Somehow I missed this before, but it is lovely.  Joyce
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
12 posted 2004-01-03 07:48 PM


Your looking good Marge...James
Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
13 posted 2004-01-03 08:25 PM


Your heart overflows into your pen and graces us with the eternal beauty of love you feel...Stunningly beautiful...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
14 posted 2004-01-03 09:03 PM


I'm glad your heart is filled and that your pen blesses us with the outpouring...Happy New Year dear friend
Youngatheart
Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333

15 posted 2004-01-03 09:30 PM


I am new and would have missed enjoying this beautfiul work if you had not shared it again. I love the part: "You realize while smiling through tears that he wears the same eyes you've dreamed of for years~"
ah yes....the memory of his (blue) eyes.
Could we all be so lucky to have a second chance at love?  Youngatheart


ice
Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
16 posted 2004-01-03 10:03 PM


"When an old love burns new
in embers revived
touched by the breeze
on softly-felt sighs~"

Lyrical poetry, very nice....:-)

Good choice of pictures..

A lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it...
______ice
  ><>


Bec
Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475
Canberra
17 posted 2004-01-03 10:06 PM


Hi Marge...

*Sigh*

This is beautiful, as always. I love reading your work, as you know.

B

"I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20

mara marti
Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 10
Chicago, Illinois
18 posted 2004-01-03 10:13 PM


Hello I am a new member and so far I love this website, your poem was so beautiful, it really touched my heart.I hope to get to know you and everyone else here. It really seems like a great environment.Good job.Take care. Mara
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
19 posted 2004-01-04 10:28 AM


Thank you all so very much for letting me know you enjoyed reading this re-post from my heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Trillium
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
20 posted 2004-01-04 06:52 PM


Marge:  I didn't read this the first time around for some reason. So glad I got to read it today. Beautiful and shining with renewed love!

Love, Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
21 posted 2004-01-05 02:25 AM


Beautiful, Marge -- think I'll save it.   lol......jo
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #30 » When An Old Love Comes New - (once more)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary