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Darkness |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Darknes falls on a chocolate sunset My eve is blanketed By the icy chill of a lover's finger Frost bites ny soul Sending chills of purple magic hills Soaring 5,000 feet up Into the blue-black sky My heart is set free Whispers of a long lost romance The one that got away Sorrow enraptures my lonely entity Yet I am free Liberated from the prison That you isolated me in Sent me in fits of Insane rapture Rage of a harmonic type Fierce fires raging like Strawbery diamonds A treat of sweetness infinite Would have been the Delight your kiss Sent through my being Heaven in a moonless sky Dark of a blinded heart Wounded soul Damned to be tortured By the merciless Satan of lust That demon jackal of love He continues to peek his face Around every corner I see him I see you Smiling as if on my side But how I wish It were by my side You'd stay Alas my broken heart Can never be sewn With the same delicacy of A flower's golden petals The kiss planted on my heart By your eyes Evey shade of blue Ensues a circus of Insanity around my world Utterly mystifying is the light Of your smile That to look into your eyes Would be a danger to my Being But love still wanders In me On cold dark nights When the clouds shift I think of you When the purple haze of darkness Follows you I am there My heart beat Strokes every portion of your Soul As if begging for a chance At happily ever after But happily My every after may continue to Lay in waiting for A taste of your Caramel apple perfection So, please I beg you Lift the night off my heart I had you in a way That is only sought after By pharoahs in Egyption rule Mayans in search of a sacrifice I need you to eat away The darkness In all cases I am lost to the night And tonight I am yours Lost forever In the love your eyes gave me One last chance for Purity Touch my soul And I shall fly Free... yv *As always I encourage any and all constructive criticisms. Thank you. yv |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Loved it all...the form, the imagery. Beautiful write. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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