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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-12-14 04:34 PM


(This is our special traditional Christmas duet! God Bless You, have the happiest holidays, and may that north star guide you home always!)

Blue: Bill Charles
Purple: Noah Eaton



“HEAVENLY STAR”
by Noah Eaton & Bill Charles

~~~~
Look upon the star crowning our tree
What is it that you see?
In the blink of an eye under His golden manger
Where Mary cradles our loving Saviour


A star shines down, with its brightness
My eyes see, as they gaze
Into the heavens, and into His place
A babe in swaddling clothes, to amaze




I see eyes that shine with light
A boy with a tender warm face
He talks to angels through the night
Comforting His holiness with billows of grace


Eyes of radiance, guiding in the night
A male child, to smile with His grace
Soft words spoken, to the halo above
Bathed with her glow, at His birthplace


I see meadows of hands laid before His presence
Murmuring in mirth and praise
Stars, tears, and frankincense
The greatest love begins to raise




Colors of many hands, to worship one
many gifts to give, to our king
all that you have spoken of
a love of enlightenment, absolving


Yes, I see His love when I glance at this star
In His unconditional love we are feathered
This blessing that shall never mar
Protecting us from every storm we’ve weathered


I see a love also Noah, from this heavenly star
Unconditional, as you have written
And a blessing, to be for always
Knowing, He will never abandon…

~~~~






"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-14-2003 04:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-12-14 04:46 PM


Wow! A duet by two of my previous collaborators! I certainly am happy that I didn't miss out on reading this wonderful post. This is absolutely fabulous guys! ~ and I would love to save this for my special Christmas file! God bless you both!

Loving hugs &
Linda
Merry Christmas!

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2 posted 2003-12-14 04:58 PM


I see meadows of hands laid before His presence
Murmuring in mirth and praise
Stars, tears, and frankincense
The greatest love begins to raise


Thank you for bringing this together.
                 Sadie

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3 posted 2003-12-14 07:12 PM


I loved this piece!  Excellent work.
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4 posted 2003-12-14 07:14 PM


WOW!!  What a beauty from two of Passions finest!
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

Suetang
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5 posted 2003-12-14 07:50 PM


Hello Noah & Bill

This was a wonderful collaboration by you two......fabulous writing!

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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6 posted 2003-12-15 04:37 PM


What a gem you two wrote here.....I enjoyed it very much!!

Charisma

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7 posted 2003-12-15 05:38 PM


This summons up some Christmas spirit...James
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8 posted 2003-12-15 07:09 PM


what a wonderful duet (hugs)
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9 posted 2003-12-15 07:46 PM


A wonderful duet from two of my favorite writers. The words, the pictures and the two of you add to my Christmas spirit.

Hugs and loves and Merry Christmas to you both.
Marti

'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.'  
PEACE!!!
Indira Gandhi

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10 posted 2003-12-15 08:27 PM


Sigh~

Lovely....thank you

Lauren~

~~**~~**~~**~~**~~
May the miracle of
Christmas touch your
life with special blessing

H A P P Y  H O L I D A Y S

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11 posted 2003-12-15 08:53 PM


This is such a beautiful posts, and from
two of the best of the best!!! Thank you
both for sharing this with us.
Hugs to both of you


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12 posted 2003-12-19 12:04 PM


a beautiful duet, heres wishing you both the best of everything this Holiday.
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