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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-12-14 03:23 AM



"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-12-14 03:24 AM


beautiful...just beautiful
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2003-12-14 03:26 AM


Fantastic in thought and image!!!  ~S~

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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
3 posted 2003-12-14 03:32 AM


*smiles* you two are quick! thank you so much for the great replies. :-)
~snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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In A Melancholic Dream
4 posted 2003-12-14 03:49 AM


Awww, this is really good. You're making me wanna try something like those !!!
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-12-14 04:04 AM


had to do a double take on the title

wow! that's awesome!

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6 posted 2003-12-15 01:50 AM


You have really captured a host of emotions in such a small accounting of words.  I really like this one.
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