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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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eroded the floor of attention falls over pattern of sameness rime from heat of a body created as odd originality, it is a poem ran over by thoughts… the sky of wide smiles is hanged exposed to far-sighted. |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
Excellent Style. the sky of wide smiles is hanged exposed to far-sighted great imagery. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa I should know better than to read you when I have a few drinks in me wow |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
your best so far and I believe you have a pocketfull |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Reading one of your poems is like looking at a snapshot of pure thought. Always fascinating. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Wow! "a snapshot of pure thought" Hmmmm....You guys are on a far higher plane than me.  excellent, pandonov! |
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