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serenities_blood
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since 2003-12-21
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New Zealand

0 posted 2003-12-21 11:54 PM


When I first saw you, I looked in your eyes.
I gave my love and trust to those eyes, then and there.
And whenever I saw them, I fell even deeper into them.
I began to believe in your lies, letting you manipulate me with your powerful weapon.
But who would believe that golden eyes could hurt anyone?
Who would let anything come between them and the person they thought they loved?
Everyday i fell further into those eyes, not seeing the lack of love in them.
Too gold and strong to see beyond them.
But now i know that those eyes were only lies of your world.
Now i know your eyes had secrets of lust and distrust.
Now i see the fool i was to them, i see the fool i was for you.
But now those eyes haunt the dreams that were once of love for them.
I now cannot look into eyes of beauty.
Now i do not believe in love or love of life.
You have broken me.
And all because you looked at me with those golden eyes.

xoxLORxox

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Kazeru
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since 2003-12-16
Posts 31

1 posted 2003-12-22 12:09 PM


Tis true that love can be blinding, but once you've opened your eyes, you will see the truth behind those golden eyes and learn from it... Very beautiful write, I enjoyed it!
Greetz Kazeru

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

serenities_blood
Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
2 posted 2003-12-22 12:11 PM


Thank you very much!
It's just based on a personal experience.
Wasnt necessarily the eyes i was blinded by, but you are right, just love overall.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-12-23 12:24 PM


Great poet..I agree! love is blind sometimes we get so caught up in the spell that we can't see through the smoke ....and choke!

~ARH


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