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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-12-13 10:18 AM


Dear reader,
I have used the term she, but this also includes the gentlemen that read.
Love Bon-Bon



Precious Stitches

She comes searching with eyes aglow filled with
curiosity.
Touching each line like a delicate flower that is
opening to the dawn of a first kiss.
As she touches each expression
she finds precious stitches
of
gold and silver in every word.
These cherished words weaving an
intricate tapestry
of
mystery and succulent pleasures.
She touches with perception each morsel the writer
does share.
Each line bringing life into view of packages
wrapped in brightly colored hues.
Maybe one line giving her the answer she
has been looking for all her life.
Another leading her down a path of tears and sorrow,
for the writer has touched her deep within her
searching soul.
Taste these visions with each touch, my friend.
Enjoy the world of poetry.


© Copyright 2003 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-12-13 10:44 AM


Nice stitchery, Bonnie! A beautiful quilt or pillow to cuddle with on a cold December morning. THANKS!
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-12-13 01:34 PM


Poetry is all that, a gift unto others.
You have captured the feelings and overwhelming emotions beautifully, Bonnie.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-12-13 01:37 PM


it really is another world isnt it?

beautiful writing here Bonnie

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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4 posted 2003-12-14 02:07 AM


Thank you for the inspiration, Bonnie.  Words are the most powerful weapon on the planet, aren't they.


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2003-12-14 02:53 AM


Oh, this is wonderful, Bonnie, and much enjoyed by this writer/seamstress!!!  ~S~

Life is what you make it
Don't let it make you...

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