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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-12-13 08:18 AM



it ...
lingers awhile
suspends me in time
holding onto that smile
the warmth and the rhyme
of your breath,
moistening lips
with kisses, the wet
touched from the tips
of such sweetness, I let
you engulf me with pleasures
and eye me with words
then cloak me in passions
of purple, when heard
massaging my tensions
and egos, let go
craddling my softness
uncovering, my show

it...
lingers awhile
suspends me in time
my memories of you
are all stored in my rhyme....

M


(a time when I could "feel")

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2003-12-13 08:45 AM


nakdthoughts - words of romance, like them...

BC

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-12-13 09:22 AM


those are some memories worth keeping
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-12-13 01:41 PM


Funny how "it" doesn't have a name,
The feelings you write of bring back
memories of days gone by, when "it"
mattered too much.   Hugs~

I'm so glad you made it back, missed you Maur~

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-12-13 01:43 PM


some days you are me
Antonio_L
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5 posted 2003-12-13 02:16 PM


Oh no, do not give it a name NakedThoughts, the memories are too sweet and precious to be made ordinary with a name.

Tony. J

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2003-12-13 02:37 PM


Bill, thanks ..how are the new "digs"


M

Midnitesun,  don't worry, those memories are for keeps
hugs
M

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2003-12-13 02:43 PM


BluesSerenade..it is just "it"

yes, when  it all mattered.
I missed you too...these computers can sure get sick when you don't pay attention to them.

squeeze:
M

Dixie yes you must be my Floridian twin
hugs you
(it does have to get better...)


Tony, I couldn't give "it" a name...and  sometimes it has many faces...but is definitely not ordinary.
Thank You
M

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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8 posted 2003-12-14 07:57 AM


i like that.....the cloak of purple

memories stored now in rhymes.. at least we have the rhymes these times
hugs, michele

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