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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Whenever Whenever fire flows to bright It glows the ego of a light Placed within a field of force It moves a bee on honey’s course It seeks endearments show in bud A swift and onward rush of blood An ember brought to raw and braw With echoes of a lovers awe A chant of pure Gregorian It charges to oblivion Brings to vision field and stream Upon the slip of rainbows beam And we find our treasure trove Laced within a pleasures rove Made of poppies velvet glove Simmering a pot of love. And this nectar’s potent brew Serves the essence of the coop. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A chant of pure Gregorian It charges to oblivion Brings to vision field and stream Upon the slip of rainbows beam ~*~ Where two may walk in touch of hand to sit the stream nearby the strand to contemplate all that was to view their history in their pause...   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A chant of pure Gregorian It charges to oblivion Brings to vision field and stream Upon the slip of rainbows beam " Ah Sy..the above verse gave me goosebumps... the good kind!  Wonderful wonderful verse with such a beautiful flow. Hey! The sun is out and it isn't snowing.. What more could one ask for? Tea? It's on it's way...be right there. ~Smiles, hugs, tea and me!~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
This one just carries the reader along, like a raft down a river. Well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good afternoon Seymour another fine piece to read here in this afternoon, though it is rainy, cold, and gray, light and warmth are here in Passions |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whenever fire flows to bright It glows the ego of a light Placed within a field of force It moves a bee on honey’s course It seeks endearments show in bud A swift and onward rush of blood An ember brought to raw and braw With echoes of a lovers awe A chant of pure Gregorian It charges to oblivion Brings to vision field and stream Upon the slip of rainbows beam ================================ those verses are just so cool that it leaves me moth giddy...the vision and wit of them are so poetically clever that all I can do is smile at you.  Whenever fire flows to bright It glows the ego of a light forget the bee...you are the pretty blue flame of the poetry moths.  *ww*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Love your reply. Nancy, Tea and sympathy, love it. Hugs Thank you James passing, Thank you sweety, Hugs. JM, Whenever fire flows to bright It glows the ego of a light And when I look into the bright I see a Moth within my sight. WWRS |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such a talented poet you are Seymour~ This is heaven 'scent', like potpourri that fills the air. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
One only has to mention "Gregorian chant" and I'm off doing my own version of one! lol  Enjoyed this brew of your sweet poetic nectar! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
now you've got to get onto the whoever etc. whatever made me say that?...enjoyed the flow |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
beautiful |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful, beautiful rhyme devine, my friend. I've missed you, Seymour, the last couple of days. Hope all is well with you....  |
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