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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-12-12 12:42 PM


On this day I smiled more than ever,
Because you said you'll leave me never.
On this day I felt what I never have before,
Happiness for that's what our future has in store.
On this day I know I've made the best choice,
And ringing in my head is your Angelic voice.
And on this day...We have so much to say,
On this day we'll be together forever.

I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed-

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-12-12 12:45 PM


Oh HUGE sigh here!!!
Fantastic and beautiful write Kyle.
Lucky lady will melt when she sees this!
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...   

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
2 posted 2003-12-12 12:48 PM


I agree with my sister Enchantress - this is beautiful Snow. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
3 posted 2003-12-12 12:50 PM


well thank ya guys...i doubt ill show it to her last time i showed her one she cried :-p

I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed-

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-12-12 01:26 PM


Snowflake,
A snowflakes forever is the same as any other. LOL enjoyed.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2003-12-12 03:12 PM


beautiful!  hugs and smiles
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