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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-12-12 06:14 AM



We enter the arena, lights dim and the band walks on stage, i look at you.

Blinding light, beams from the overhead lights, as the band kick into their stride, the glowing rainbow of colours are in your eyes, red, yellow, orange and blue.

You lean against me as we watch the band, gently i kiss your head and wrap my arms around you.
Holding onto my hands, you caress and touch my fingers.

Between tracks, i kiss your sweet lips deeply, with passion in the dimmed light, for an age it lingers.

Whooping and whistling at the end of the conert,we raise our hands to applaud a great concert, a night to remember.

Afterwards we go to a restaraunt, eat a fine meal, drink a milkshake, laugh and talk about the concert.
It will be something that i will think about in October, November and December.

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-12-12 10:41 AM


hehe, and all the rest of the months, no doubt
a tender write
thanks for sharing

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-12-12 10:55 AM


beautifully written and expressed
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-12-13 04:57 AM


You know I love strawberry milkshakes...LOL..and one night to remember always.....

My favorite part was the kisses in between the show.....

and the conversation afterwards...

My love thank you for this wonderful date,
I enjoyed every minute of it, you are so romantic....loveable...

what number is this poem? 91 written for me and about me....getting close to one hundred my love!

We will have to celebrate!

~xxxx Love ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-12-13 05:02 AM


sweet
Goldenrose
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5 posted 2003-12-13 05:30 AM


The band would HAVE to be Journey my love....would love to laugh and talk with you about the concert my sweetest....love ..

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxx

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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