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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-12-11 10:20 PM


i called to say
i love you
i love you
but i all i say is
hello
whispering voices
afraid one wrong word
might tear the world apart
might tear their hearts aparts
so we whisper
so quiet
so quiet
i called to say
i love you
i love you
but all i say is
goodbye


"hello my name is distance,
and i really don't care if
i never wake up again."


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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-12-12 03:57 AM


ouch
SuperGlueRyan
Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 45
Possum Kingdom
2 posted 2003-12-12 04:00 AM


It is terrible when all you can think about is how to express your love, and you can't manage to verbalize it. Instead merely mouth the words. This is definately something that I have caught myself doing. Well done.
~Ryan

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