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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2003-12-11 03:41 PM


Walking hand in hand
warming each others heart
sweet steps loving each other
stillness of knowing true love
hugging the ground,
remembering.

Those special moments
merging souls in nature’s music
love birds of eternity
cuddling in everlasting friendship
trust never evaporating
but condensing,
remembering.

The intermingling relationship
walking hand in hand
singing inside so joyously
stars outside always shining
walking together
our special universe
taking lifelong steps,
remembering.

Footprints fading away
love growing stronger
merging as one
remembering
throughout time.

D.Lester Young
Poetry sings throughout time 12/08/03



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1 posted 2003-12-11 04:43 PM


I love the way you used the season to intensify where love goes in the cool of the day, and you did it so well.

                    
Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

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