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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We deny ourselves nothing. Only the tease of our delight dims in distance. It's what always draws us near. When one more step would break us - We collide. To only step away...and tease ourselves in distance once more. |
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WannabePoet Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 62New York USA |
Very profound, you found a way to convey so much emotion, with so few words. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.  |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Ericc, this is a very deliteful piece, I like the concepts here they are much needed and adds a touch of grace to the poem! Good Job and keep up the good work. Love, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a graceful dance! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Oh wow. I love this! ~Snatches it and stuffs it into her library!~ I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, what a dance it is, though!! LOL Happy Holidays, Eric  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
been there, done it...it gets old...but in its own time I guess |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Aahhhh...Dixie...we all have "been there, done that" countless times. This is Samsara, the seemingly endless cycle of birth, death and birth once more. The dance trickles down to every aspect of our selves. We are Love born to know ourselves as the experience of you and I. The Infinite trickled down as human expressions. We always collide back to the source. Thats the Divine dance of who we are. The key is to dance lightly. In the end...we only dance with Angels. Love, Eric |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your poetry lifts me. Thanks Eric. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully expressed as always Eric. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Wow, Nice write I enjoyed it alot. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh you do write so many things that I wish had come out of my pen! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc...So lovely, so true! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Eric, your reply to me had me sitting here in awe of you brilliant! I'm saving this to my library  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The heart knows. I dance along ... So beautiful dear Eric. I love you. Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the background and concept to this lovely poem, sweet friend, the cycle never ends as not every cycle has to be broken when promoting life and peace, God Bless You, happy holidays, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful graceful dance. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dear One... Simply extraordinary...as usual! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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